[Poetry] Two Poems by Mike Sluchinski
- David M. Olsen
- 2 days ago
- 2 min read
i prayed for the haole in me (or haole prayers)
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climbing diamond head
half a day lookout past barb wire
pele’s canoes beached in the
flat water down there down
looking out past the mountains
to the blue seas past pele’s hips and
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i prayed for the haole in me
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rock bottom hidden by icing sugar sand
under the clear
waves that pele’s canoes roamed
did she dance here
at makapu’u
her rock cousins
bounced my shoulder
and she kissed it red and
bruised while my board drifted
in her foam breath and
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i prayed for the haole in me
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that time my young time
and pineapple and coconut
seasons coming and going
like people at banana jims
wooden shaved ice stand
and
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i prayed for the haole in me
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and swaying to iz and hearing
about the duke
going north to the
altars there and waters there
and kneeling and hands
deep in sand and
salt water tears            Â
running riptides
never wanted to ever leave
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i prayed for the haole in me
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near ollie’s point (or belly riders lament)
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we sing so deep waves dark
and I want to lie and story tell odysseus
I was brave and alone and the reef I met with
a face so brave and no doubt waved and looked
with a face so brave but it's a lie and
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and had a friend there the rivermouth
and sharky old black water
deep and dark blue going down and
down and blindfolded duck dive
black streaks and kelp caresses
bottom wise and top set
and a slop day no surf
ragged and charred waves
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and belly riding
trailer park drive bys here and there
and the boat damned from the daybreak
wicked and sloppy and blown out
witchy sharky paddle evil dark waters
and pools drifting down
and under fro and to the south side
current pushed and shoved and woe
the kind to paddle in place and
nowhere not a move not a wave
and arms worn red rash
tasting salt crumbs
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old boat sat and hard boards kneeling
and a back worn wet rolls and turn back to
land ho and all the rest for a brown bottle
and rice and beans by the bowl
splashes lime and pepper sauce
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streaky and lazy offshore wind
time to spin south
another break
open seas and drifting ronin
point break another day for
ollie’s point
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Mike Sluchinski writes mountainside, high in the Saskatchewan alps. He believes in getting back in the canoe, bailing if swamped, and the second coming. Most of his work runs ekphrastic and stream of consciousness based on his own experiences. He gratefully acknowledges the Cheryl and Henry Kloppenburg Foundation for their support of the arts. Very gratefully published by Kelp Journal & The Wave, ‘the fib review’, Eternal Haunted Summer, Syncopation Lit. Journal, Ocean Poetry Anthology 2024, South Florida Poetry Journal (SOFLOPOJO), Freefall, Viewless Wings and more coming!

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